I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 12, 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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hi Riley:)
ReplyDeletei like the way you added wow words
next time you should add some more imitation
by your friend-Naomi
Hi my name is Aaleiyah from South Hornby School
ReplyDeleteHi Riley
I liked that you put a hook at the start of your writing it made made me read it all instead of me only read one sentence.
Next time you can add more wow words
From Aaleiyah