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Friday, June 12, 2020

silent film paragraph 1

Enjoy reading paragraph 1

2 comments:

  1. hi Riley:)
    i like the way you added wow words
    next time you should add some more imitation
    by your friend-Naomi

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  2. Hi my name is Aaleiyah from South Hornby School
    Hi Riley
    I liked that you put a hook at the start of your writing it made made me read it all instead of me only read one sentence.
    Next time you can add more wow words
    From Aaleiyah

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